PEER REVIEW of Arthur's letters:
Hey,
I read all three of your letters, and I think that you ask some great questions. I, personally, knew nothing about the link between the environment and autism, so I am interested, as well. Your paragraphs are good...I would just go back and take a look at the grammar and "effect" should be affect when you're talking about a verb. Overall, great letters!
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